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CAUSEWAY ROLLS OUT commission

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A commission for the lovely :iconlady-elitaone-arts: of her OC Causeway escaping an explosion in her alt-mode. Made to resemble official concept art for the Transformers film franchise.

Causeway © Elita One
Art by Me
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:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

While this is, in fact, really well done, i have a few comments. You seem to be adding highlights where they are not needed. If the light source is behind it, there would not be so much highlighting near the bottom of the truck. I also think it wouldn't help to work more with perspective work- while I know very little about trucks, some of these angles near the windshield don't look right. I also would like to point out, with the shading style you chose- very soft blending, with few hard edges in the shadows/highlights, you should think about not using such thick black lines. I struggled with this, and it is a hard habit to break. Thinking in planes and doing vague silhouettes and adding detail with light and shadow is the best way to go if you want a more realistic look. I love the idea, but your technique is not so much lacking, but needs more work in my opinion. That can be fixed, though. I hope i see more of your work in the future!