SPIRIT VS SPIRIT Ness vs Dajjal

This is a really lovely work with great visual impact. The lines are very crisp and thing and the coloring really pops out. The used shading technique is really reminiscent of th DBZ style. The characters look powerful and intimidating.

The scene and stand off are really clear. The idea behind this was excellent. The picture is powerful and it looks pretty intimidating at first glance. I couldnt press the fav button quick enough. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="366" title=" (Big Grin)"/>

The text balloons are the only thing that I feel detract from the picture. There is waaaay too much text in them. Its kind of a shame because this really detracts attention away from the powerful vision. Having a dramatic speech is fine but should be broken up across multiple images/comic panels.

This work would be a perfect splash page or maybe even a cliffhanger as an introduction to the main fight. It could work well to open with just the first line for each of them and then spread the dialogue out over follow-up pages. Maybe even during the fight.